Long Shot

Long Shot

By Allie Marie

It is a long shot

and you know it.

Here we start.

It is all smart talk.

He says no,

but you don’t mind so.

You though are practically a stranger.

Embarrassed, he points at danger.

I already though protect myself

and leave my heart up on a shelf.

Your words seem to sound sweeter.

Maybe, I don’t know any better.


3 thoughts on “Long Shot”

    1. Thanks! I’m not sure if I have any great tips. My writing at times tends to be more of a stream of consciousness more than anything else. What I would say though with this particular piece is to try to recap the situation or whatever your feeling/observing in a short concise way and try to write as if it is more of a conversation. Just have fun with it and experiment. Good luck!

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